A Ranma ½ story
by Exar
Disclaimer: Ranma ½ and its characters and settings belong to
Rumiko Takahashi, Shogakukan, Kitty, and Viz Video. In no way is this
a claim to these characters. I make no money from this.
Exar, A.K.A. Ben Jernigan: selfemployedninja@gmail.com
Foreword: There are really longwinded author's notes at the bottom. Read
if you care to. Some ideas about the nature of ki shamelessly ripped off
from Brian Randall's "Burst of Confidence". But largely based
on the manga anyway. Comments and constructive criticism always welcome.
Flames will make me cry. Do you really want that on your conscience?
Chapter 4
Ranma rolled out of bed at his standard time. 6:34 A.M. He would have
sparred with the old man, but Genma was in panda form, and still hung
over. Got to practice by myself this morning, he thought. Oh well, it's
not like I really need Pops anymore.
He pulled on a gi and leapt out the window, certain in his ability to
land safely. He hadn't reckoned on Shampoo being in the way.
She'd been indecisively standing at the edge of the roof, trying to determine
if she should wake him, and had decided not to, this time. She'd just
jumped down to go when he exited the building.
They collided in midair, and spun wildly out of control before crashing
in a heap on the ground below.
Ranma lay on his back, gasping for air due to Shampoo landing atop him.
She recovered instantly and twisted to face him.
"Nihao, Ranma. Shampoo come remind you of promise you make to take
her on date. Festival is coming up this weekend and Shampoo would like
go with Airen!" she said, bubbly and cheerful and clearly enjoying
lying on top of Ranma.
"Sure, Shampoo, just get offa me, wouldja? I gotta warm up,"
he mumbled, gesturing with the one hand that wasn't trapped between them.
"Wo ai ni, Ranma," she said, then rose and leapt away.
Ranma got up and began his morning regimen. It was going to be a long
day. He just knew it.
Ranma walked into the kitchen where Kasumi was making breakfast.
"Mornin', Kasumi. What'cha fixin'?"
"Good morning, Ranma," she said, smiling. "The store had
a sale on traditional American breakfast food, so I thought we'd try a
little variety this morning."
Spread on the counter before her was a box of pancake mix, some eggs,
bacon, bread for toast, and instant powdered grits.
"Wow. I've never had an American breakfast before. Their burgers
are pretty good, though. And with you cooking, it can't be bad."
Kasumi blushed at the complement and shooed him out of the kitchen with
orders to take a bath.
Ranma walked into the hall and past the stairs just as Akane came down.
She saw him and hurried to catch up.
"Ranma…," she said, tentatively.
"Yes, Akane?", Ranma replied, carefully keeping his face calm.
"After your bath, I… I'd like to talk to you." She lowered
her gaze and stared at the floor, hoping he'd give her a chance.
"Uh, sure. I'll meet you in the dojo, okay?"
"Sure. Er… thanks, Ranma," she said, turning and sprinting
back up the stairs.
Ranma stared at where she'd been, thinking to himself 'What was that
all about?'.
Ryoga awoke in a small cage, unsure of where he was. In the next cage
over, there lay a duck.
"Bwee!!" (Translation for those who don't speak pig: Mousse?
Where am I?)
"Qwack…" (Translation for those who don't speak duck:
Just five more minutes, mom…)
"Bwee, bwee!" (Mousse, wake up! Get me outta here!)
"Quack, wakk." (Ryoga, you know I can't understand you when
you're a pig. Leave me alone.)
"WEE! BWEE! BWEEE! BWEEEE!!" (ARRGH! I CAN'T UNDERSTAND YOU!
I HATE BEING A PIG! RANMA, THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!)
Shampoo walked in, wondering what all the ruckus was about, and saw that
Ryoga had woken up.
"Pig-boy, Shampoo turn you human if promise not hit on Shampoo."
Ryoga held one hoof up in a porcine version of a scout's salute. "Bwee."
(I Promise.)
Mousse was too busy having a conniption fit to really do much. "Quack-Wakk-Wakk!"
(What? Hibiki hitting on my Shampoo? I'll never stand for it! Never!!)
Shampoo pulled Ryoga out of his cage, walked to one of the Cat Cafe's
bathrooms and tossed him in, along with his clothes and a kettle.
Moments later, a human, clothed, and slightly steaming Ryoga walked out
of the bathroom.
"Shampoo, thank you for your hospitality, could I repay you by taking
you to a movie tonight?"
"ARRGH! Shampoo forget! Casanova Point not work on animal, only
human. Promise made in pig form not hold."
"I'm sorry, did I break my promise? Let me make a new one. I'll
be by your side forever. Now let's seal our promise with a kiss."
"Stupid Pig-boy try make Shampoo sick? Out!"
"But Shampoo…"
Shampoo cut off what Ryoga had planned to say by grabbing him by the
neck and throwing him headlong out a convenient window.
She sat down at a table and reigned in her temper.
"Aiyah. Even Mousse not that annoying."
Ranma walked into the dojo with a wary look on his face. He wasn't sure
what to expect from Akane, but he wasn't expecting it to be pleasant.
She hated him, after all.
He walked up to where she sat, leaned against one wall, and squatted
down in front of her, resting on the balls of his feet, heels in the air.
"Whattaya want to talk about, Akane?"
Akane stared at him for a moment, a small blush riding her features,
and then spoke.
"Ranma, I… may have been mistaken. I want to apologize. To
you. I said some things that I didn't really mean. I'm not saying I like
you or anything, but I don't hate you, Ranma. I'd kind of like to be your
friend."
Ranma froze in astonishment as dozens of voices repeated in his head:
Akane doesn't hate you.
Akane stared at him, nervously working her hands, waiting for him to
respond.
Finally, he snapped out of his daze and replied.
"Akane, I, uh, I accept your apology. I'd like to be your friend,
too."
Ranma thought to himself, 'I love her, but she doesn't love me back.
If 'friends' is the best I can get, I'll take it.'
He extended his hand. "Friends?"
Akane thought to herself, 'I l— like him, but he doesn't seem
to like me back. If 'friends' is all I can get, I'll take it.'
She took his hand in her own and shook it. "Friends. I still get
to mallet you if you do something perverted, though. And you better be
good to my sister!"
"I wouldn't have it any other way."
Akane let go of his hand, and smiling, asked, "Hey, would you like
to spar? You know, for fun?"
"Umm, yeah. Now that you aren't my fiancée, I guess I can
do that. Just let me do something real quick."
"Okay."
Ranma walked over to the door and picked up the bucket kept there. He
stepped outside, and dumped the water over himself.
Ranma walked back inside, replaced the bucket, and moved up to face Akane.
"Now we can go. It doesn't feel as weird fighting a girl when I
am one."
He took a relaxed stance, and she a tense, stylized one. Reacting to
an unseen signal, they rushed at each other, and began their dance.
Kasumi watched them from her place just outside, and felt glad that Ranma
and Akane had settled some of their differences. She just couldn't understand
the small part of her that wished they hadn't.
Breakfast passed quietly, but without the awkward silences that had become
common lately, as Ranma and Akane attempted to ignore each other's very
existence.
As Ranma helped Kasumi pick up the dirty dishes, he cleared his throat
and spoke softly.
"Kasumi, I wanted to talk to you about this weekend. The Festival
is comin' up and…"
"That's wonderful, son! You're welcome to take Kasumi to the festival!
Here, I'll even help out and give you some money to take her with!"
Ranma found himself being hugged and backslapped at the same time, as
his father and Mr. Tendo congratulated him for taking the initiative with
Kasumi. Soun shoved a small wad of bills into Ranma's hand, making Ranma
mildly angry, because he knew where the money had likely come from.
Kasumi had an odd look on her face, almost hopeful, but also partially
fearful. Ranma saw this, and for once accurately interpreted the emotions
he saw there.
"Ranma, is this true? Did you want to take me to the festival?"
she asked.
Ranma couldn't say no to that face. He just couldn't do it.
"Yeah, Kasumi, I did. Wouldja like to go with me?"
She smiled then, and the smile lit up her face like a beacon. This was
different than the normal 'cheerful' smile she wore all day. This was
a genuine smile that simply showed how happy she was. Ranma knew he was
going to get into trouble about this, but somehow, looking at Kasumi's
smile, it didn't really matter.
Ranma was Sitting Still.
Very still.
And he was breathing.
In.
And Out.
Because that's how you meditate.
Sit Still, Breathe In and Out. Be at One with the Cosmos.
Be Cosmically Bored.
"This isn't working."
Ranma's ankle was healed, but never one to pass up an opportunity, he
was milking it a bit, and stayed home another day.
He was currently trying various methods of thinking of a way out of the
latest mess he seemed to have found himself in.
Fact: Ranma promised to take Shampoo to the festival.
Fact: Ranma promised to take Kasumi to the festival.
Problem: There is only one Ranma.
Solution that won't hurt anyone's feelings: Still in progress.
"Crap."
Ryoga was lost.
Normally, this isn't saying much. Rather, it's like saying a tree is
green or that water is wet. In other words, generally true, but with some
variance based on seasonal changes.
Today, he was fairly sure where he was geographically, but he was still
going places he'd never been before.
For instance, a singles bar.
He'd seen the sign for the bar from six blocks away, while trying to
find his way to the Tendo Dojo, and suddenly lost all control of his feet.
Now he was inside, and facing a rather pretty girl with pink hair, enough
piercings to set off a metal detector next door, and breath like a Tennessee
still.
Ryoga wasn't totally certain what time zone he was in, but he was pretty
sure it was a little early to be as drunk as this girl seemed to be.
"Yer cute, mister."
"Why thank you miss, you are a vision of loveliness yourself."
"Join me for a drink?"
"I'd rather you joined me for a stroll. I know of a little place
we can go to be alone."
In his own mind, Ryoga sighed in frustration, having become somewhat
used to being a passenger in his own body.
"You're a bold one, but I'm in the mood for a little fun. Lead on"
Ryoga took her arm and walked out the door, a confident spring in his
step.
They walked a few blocks in silence, with Ryoga internally wondering
how he was going to get out of this, and the girl seeming to need all
her concentration to stay upright. Ryoga began to get truly concerned
when they found themselves standing in front of a love hotel.
The girl clutched Ryoga's arm and looked up into his eyes.
"I hope you martial artist types are a flexible as you look while
yer fightin'."
The passing car, and the spraying water it launched into the air as it
hit a puddle, mercifully saved him from responding.
Never had Ryoga been so grateful for his curse. If he landed in a cookpot
five minutes from now, he still would be glad for it.
P-chan fled as quickly as his porcine hooves could carry him.
Ranma stood in front of the Cat Cafe, hesitant to enter, but not knowing
where else to go.
Mousse walked by, glasses off, and Ranma saw little reason to provoke
him. Ignoring the white robed martial artist, Ranma walked inside.
Cologne looked up for her cooking and saw him enter. She hopped out into
the dining room to greet him.
"Welcome, son-in-law! Shampoo isn't here, if you were coming to
visit her; or did you want your old job back?"
"Neither, ol' ghoul. I wanted to ask you a question."
"Really? You have need of my wisdom? Perhaps you should be more
respectful when you come asking favors, son-in-law."
"I didn't mean ta…"
"Yes you did, young man. You were quite clear. Until you can be
more respectful, I see no need to tell you anything. Good day."
Shocked at her abrupt refusal, Ranma watched Cologne hop away.
Ranma realized he would gain nothing here, and left.
As he walked down the sidewalk, away from the restaurant, he muttered,
"She'll teach me all kinds of things when I want her to leave me
alone, but when I want to learn something, she blows me off. What's the
deal with that?"
Unexpectedly, a voice answered him.
"Saotome, that is because not every martial arts instructor is like
your father, or Happosai. Some are truly worthy of respect, and expect
it, rather than demand it. Especially from students attempting to learn
the deepest secrets of the art."
Ranma whirled in surprise, to see Mousse leaning against a telephone
pole, glasses on.
"Why should I respect the ol' ghoul? She's caused nothin' but trouble
for me since she came here!"
"Yes, trouble that has taught you some of the most powerful of the
Chinese Amazon techniques. You think she teaches just anyone the Chestnut
Fist? Or the Rising Dragon Ascension Wave?"
Mousse added in a quieter, more dangerous tone of voice, "You think
she's taught them to me?"
Ranma swallowed nervously, and replied, "I— I never thought
about that."
"Well, start thinking, Saotome. I saw the end of your fight with
Dr. Tofu the other day. If you want Cologne to teach you the secrets of
ki, you will have to treat her like the master she truly is."
"Why are you telling me this, Mousse?"
"Why? Because I want you to try, and I want you to fail. And I want
you to do it right in front of Shampoo, so she can see the truth about
Ranma Saotome."
"Gee, thanks. You're on top of my Christmas list, too."
Mousse simply smirked and strode away from Ranma.
Ranma approached the sleeping panda with a kettle in hand. He poked his
father experimentally with his foot, then dumped the kettle on the unconsious
bear.
Genma sat up spluttering and flailing his arms randomly, forcing Ranma
to duck or be swatted.
Genma regained his composure and glared balefully at his son.
"What are you doing, boy? There's no reason to disturb your poor
father in such a way."
Ranma sat in front of his father and said, "I need your help, Pop.
I need to learn about somethin' called ki."
Genma sat up, a serious look on his face.
"Ranma, my boy. I know you are committed to learning and perfecting
the art, but you must think long and hard before deciding to learn a ki-based
attack."
Okay. The "wise teacher" act I'm used to, but this is different. "Why's that, pop?"
"Escalation, Ranma."
"Huh?"
"As soon as you learn a ki attack, your rivals will rush and train
and learn their own. Once you all have ki attacks, any of you making the
smallest mistake in a fight could easily kill an innocent bystander. Are
you ready to take that risk?"
"I'd rather not, pops, but Doc Tofu already knows a ki attack and
has used it on me. I need something to counter with."
"Hmm. Very well. I suggest you speak with Cologne, then. She can
teach you."
"Why not you, pops?"
"I have my reasons, boy. Leave me be."
With that, Genma tipped a glass onto his head and rolled over, slipping
into ursine slumber.
Ranma walked slowly through the Tendo house, his hands clasped behind
his back.
"Well, great. Pops was no help at all. I better know a little more
about this 'ki' stuff before the doc gets it in his head to come after
me again. I don't figure it'll take long."
He wandered into the dining room, and happened to glance Kasumi out in
the yard, hanging up laundry.
"That's another problem, the festival is tomorrow and I still don't
know what I'm going to do about it."
Ranma sat down on the edge of the porch and slapped his fist into his
palm.
"Why's everythin' gotta be so complicated?"
He looked up to see a startled-looking Kasumi staring at him.
"Whoops. Hehe. Didn't mean to say that so loud."
Kasumi finished hanging the shirt she had in her hands, then came over
and sat next to Ranma.
"What's wrong, Ranma? Anything I can help with, or that you just
want to talk about?"
"Well, I dunno. Some of it, I doubt you could help with, but the
rest… I better not say, you'll just get mad at me."
"Ranma, I'm not Akane. I can't promise that I won't be mad, but
I do promise I'll listen to you, and give you the benefit of the doubt."
"Really? You won't just blame me right away?"
"Really. Now tell me what's so complicated."
"Welllll…. first off, the Doc hit me with an attack I'd never
seen before at the end of our fight the other day. It's called a 'ki'
attack. It's like somethin' outta a manga. I didn't think people could
actually do that. But I guess I was wrong. I tried to get Cologne to tell
me about them, but she got all mad about me not respectin' her enough,
and told me to get out. Then I asked pops and he told me it was a waste
of time, that it took too much discipline for our school. But trust me,
the way it hit me, that's no waste of time."
Ranma slumped a bit, his chin resting on his chest.
"So you think Cologne knows more about these attacks, maybe could
teach you one?"
"Yeah, that old bat knows a little bit of everything. Three thousand
years of Chinese Amazon history and all that."
"Well, you may have to just swallow your pride and be gracious to
her. I know she's done some terrible things to you, but she's also helped
you a lot. Remember how she trained you when you had the moxibustion?"
Ranma lifted his head and looked at Kasumi seriously.
"Yeah, she's all right. For an ol' ghoul," He finished with
a grin.
"I guess I could try that. I won't brown nose, but I guess I can
cut the insults. Mostly. As long as she actually teaches me somethin'."
"All right, that's one complication out of the way. I get the feeling
there's more than that, though."
Ranma blushed, and hung his head again.
"Yeah, um. That is, about tomorrow…"
Kasumi's eyes widened a bit, and she whispered, "You don't want
to take me to the festival…"
Ranma quickly waved his hands in denial.
"No! I want to! I just… I just kinda promised Shampoo I would
take her. Before I ever talked to you about it."
"So why did you say you wanted to take me? Why lie?" She asked,
while thinking inside, 'Why get my hopes up?'
"When I started to talk to you, your dad jumped in and assumed that
I was asking you to go. I was actually going to just tell you I would
be gone, so you wouldn't have to cook for me."
Ranma stared at his shoes intensely, and continued.
"I was still gonna say the same thing till I looked at you, and
I saw how hopeful you looked. How nervous. And I just couldn't refuse
you. I-I'm sorry. You looked so happy after, and now I'm screwing it all
up."
Kasumi reached over and tilted Ranma's head up, her hand on his chin.
Gently, she turned his head so he was looking at her.
She had a sad kind of smile on her face, but didn't seem angry.
"Well, Ranma, I can't say I'm happy that you are skipping out on
a date, but if you promised, I guess I can forgive you. But I can say
this. I am happy that you told me up front, rather than leaving me to
figure it out tomorrow. If you had been honest from the start, I'd have
been even happier, but I understand why you lied to me. Daddy can be very
overwhelming, and you don't want to hurt me."
Ranma's voice was very quiet as he said, "Yeah."
Kasumi dabbed at the corner of one eye and said, "But I want you
to realize that you did hurt me, it just took longer than saying no in
the first place would have, and it hurt more than that would have. Please,
from now on, don't lie to me. You talked about Akane not trusting you.
I want to trust you, but I can't if you lie to me. Trust is something
you earn, Ranma."
"Y-you're right, Kasumi. Never again."
"Thank you, Ranma. Now if there's nothing else you want to talk
about, I have laundry to finish." Having said that, Kasumi stood
and favored Ranma with a glowing smile.
"No, I think we got it covered, Kasumi!"
A grin finding its way onto his face, he bounced to his feet, and leapt
out of the yard.
P-chan scurried through Nerima, homing in on the Cat Cafe in his own
inimitable manner.
Through sheer luck or the blessing of a fickle god, he found himself
there in record time.
He squealed frantically at Shampoo, angrily cursing her and all amazons
in the foulest oinks he could muster. He even went so far as to invoke
the name of the dread Lord Porcus, god of sausage factories.
Taking pity on the little bwee machine, Shampoo took him into the back,
laid out clothes for him and set a kettle out, before beating a swift
retreat.
Upon resuming human form, he very carefully removed one of his bandannas,
and tied it over his eyes.
He stumbled out of the back room, (unknowingly) doing a very good Mousse
impression, and called out to Shampoo.
"Shampoo! Don't say anything. As long as I can't see or hear you,
I'm in control. You have got to turn off this pressure point! I can't
stop asking out every woman I see! I don't wanna be a womanizer!"
A dry cackle echoed through the restaurant.
"You used the Casanova point on this fool, Shampoo? And didn't tell
him it lasts for ten days? You are too cruel, granddaughter."
Ryoga whirled and ripped off his improvised blindfold.
"Cologne, you lovely creature! Run away with me!"
Ranma bounced from rooftop to rooftop, crossing town at a good clip.
He jumped over a chimney flue, backflipped, grabbed the top of a chain-link
fence, did a brief handstand, and frontflipped onto the sidewalk directly
in front of the Cat Cafe.
Just in time to hear:
"ALRIGHT! SHAMPOO GO ON DATE WITH STUPID PIG-BOY!! JUST LEAVE SHAMPOO
ALONE FOR TWO SECONDS!!"
Ranma slid open the door and stuck his head in.
"Err… Is this a bad time?"
"No, it very good time. Ranma come right on in. Just stay between
Shampoo and Pig-boy. Him driving Shampoo crazy!"
"Actually, I'm here to talk to Cologne. Where is she?"
"Great-grandmother is in the basement, Ranma. What you want talking
with her about?"
"Nothing too important, Shampoo. Just had some questions for her.
Hey, if you're dating Ryoga now, am I still taking you to the festival?"
Ryoga piped up quickly with; "Shampoo, please allow me to escort
you to the festival. I'll show you a far better time than this ruffian
ever could."
Ranma blinked for a second. 'He sounds more like Kuno than Ryoga.
What's up with him lately?'
Shampoo ground her teeth together. She wheeled around to face Ryoga.
"FINE!! Now Pig-boy SHUT UP!"
She turned back to Ranma quickly and said, "Shampoo sorry, Ranma.
It look like Shampoo busy tomorrow. We go on date another time. Maybe
have roast pork dinner."
Ranma shook his head and walked downstairs, glad to get away from the
Amazon and her new beau.
"Hello, son-in-law. Come to try again, have you?"
"Er, yes. I have, Sensei."
Cologne turned from the book she was reading to regard him. "Much
better, my student. What did you wish to ask of your master?"
'Wow, it's working,' thought Ranma.
Ranma cleared is throat and said, "I want to learn more about a
kind of attack I saw the other day. A ki attack."
"Ki attack? That is interesting. I can tell you much. What are you
asking?"
"What are they? I never thought they were even real till I was being
hit by one."
"In their simplest form, ki attacks are balls of compressed air
that are shaped and fired by focusing a martial artist's life-force, or
ki, through their battle aura. More advanced forms can take on elemental
aspects, the taint of demonic forces, or the purity of the higher realms.
They require much of the martial artist who wishes to use them, but they
are a powerful addition to their arsenal."
"Wow. And how do you perform one?"
"The easiest way, but one fraught with peril, is to choose an emotion
to focus upon, and channel your life force through it. Fear, anger, depression,
greed, immature love, confidence, happiness, and so on. Negative emotions
are easier, as they are often more plentiful and closer to the surface
in a fight.
"The danger of using emotions to power ki attacks is that it encourages
that emotion in you, and makes you dependant on it. Eventually, some warriors
have become totally dominated by the emotion they have chosen, and unleashed
'perfect' versions of their attacks. These 'perfect' attacks are incredibly
destructive, but to all parties involved.
"The safer route, but much longer one, is through meditation and
physical deprivation, the martial artist can learn to exist in a emotionless
void, and then have a far greater degree of control over his life force.
This approach is best used by Buddhist monks and the like.
"Most martial artists that reach the point of using ki opt for the
middle ground. They learn to use ki through emotion, but gradually as
they learn to control their life force, they move away from emotion as
a crutch."
"That's a lot to process. Thank you, Sensei."
"Think long and hard about this Ranma. Learning to use ki will put
you into a whole new level of the art. Be certain that you are ready for
the challenge inherent in that."
"Uh, yeah. I'll think. You got it."
Ranma sat very still.
In.
And Out.
In.
And Out.
In.
'Arrgh. Still boring.'
And Out.
The door to the dojo slid open.
"Ranma, dinner is read— Oh, my! I didn't realize you were
meditating."
Ranma opened his eyes and looked up at his fiancée. She was currently
upside down, and looking rather abashed that she had interrupted him.
He put his hands on the floor and pushed off, flipping himself back rightside
up.
"No problem, Kasumi. It wasn't working very well anyway. Dinner
sounds great. I'm starved!"
She gave him a relieved smile and started to turn back toward the house.
"Hey, Kasumi! Before we go back in, I wanted to ask ya somethin'."
She stopped and waited for him to cross the floor and join her in the
doorway.
"What is it, Ranma?"
A tinge of red appeared across his cheeks as he began, and a flicker
of hope lit in her heart.
"Well, I went by the Cat Cafe to try to talk to Cologne again, and
I saw Shampoo briefly, and welll…. long story short, I'mnottakin'hersoIwannatakeyou."
Kasumi blinked as the rush of words hit her, but she paused for a moment,
and then replied.
"If you are asking what I think you are, then I would love to, Ranma."
Ranma sagged as nervous energy drained out of him.
"Whew. That wasn't as hard as I thought it would be."
"You did ask me out, right?"
Ranma got a hunted look on his face, and his eyes darted around the room,
expecting someone, anyone, to come barreling in, smash the wall in, anything.
Nothing happened.
"Uh, yeah. I did."
Kasumi hit him with a dazzling smile and said, "Good. Now let's
go eat dinner."
To be continued.
Author's notes: WHOO! Back in the groove! This chapter was really, really
hard to write.
The original version (plotted and partially written 2 years ago) was
to have Ukyo added to the mix, and Ranma trying to juggle taking all three
to the festival at once. There were to be wacky hijinks all around, culminating
in all three girls finding out what was going on and being truly pissed.
U & S were to beat on Ranma and forget about it in no time, but Kasumi
was to take it hard, and his regaining her trust was to be a subplot for
a few chapters to come.
But I couldn't write it. I can do a fight scene, and I'm getting the
hang of dialog, but the chaotic, fast-paced scenes required for the festival
sequence were (and are) beyond me at my current writing skill level. So
I got frustrated, and that is the biggest reason I quit writing fanfics
for so long.
Fast forward two years. Real life has been a bit rough on ol' Exar, I
have a lot of time on my hands, and a desire to do more with it than play
World of Warcraft (Dreanor server, horde, level 60 warrior named Midas,
or my alt, Doctormidas, a level 41 priest, if you wanna say hi). I surf
around a bit and stumble across Neon Exodus Evangelion, one of my all-time
favorite fics. I reread it and fell back in love with fan fiction. I bounced
around, visited CoRK and the Lost Library, and re-subscribed to the FFML.
So here I am, back at my old stories. :)
I've revised and renamed Love's Truth, and taken this chapter, (and of
course, subsequent ones) in a new and fresh direction. Instead of goofy
chaos, I've chosen to have this chapter focus on one of the themes that
I feel is central to this story. The development of Ranma's communication
skills, and overall maturity level.
I want to tell a good story, and a fun one, but I also want to shake
things up a bit and have Ranma grow a bit.
Will he end up with Kasumi? Not telling. Honestly haven't gotten there
yet. Ranma won't be the only one growing up. Akane is maturing as well,
and may yet win him back.
In any case, I'm glad to be back, and I hope you all enjoy reading this
as much as I've enjoyed writing it. And I promise a good fight in chapter
5 to make up for all this dialog.
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